One of our most popular writing craft episodes deserves a replay: Writing the Black Moment with USA Today Bestseller, Rachel Bailey.
NB re audio quality, we apologise that this isn’t to our current standard (despite new editing), but we’re sure you’ll find the content worth listening to nevertheless!
A fantastic tutorial on how you can take your writing to the next level!
In romance fiction, the black moment (also called the dark night of the soul) is the emotional low point—when it seems like all hope is lost, the relationship is broken beyond repair, and the characters may not find their way back to each other.
Some technique tips include:
1. Make It Deeply Personal
The black moment hits hardest when it attacks the characters’ deepest fears or vulnerabilities. Ask:
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What is your character most afraid of?
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What do they believe about love that this moment confirms?
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How does this moment feel like the ultimate betrayal or failure?
2. Use Physical and Emotional Reactions
Let your character feel it in their body—give them tears, anger, numbness, or gut-punch dread. Make readers feel it.
3. Let It Be Messy
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