I've finally received some feedback, at a micro and macro level.
Lots to think about regarding character, supporting characters and the level of trauma the character is carrying with her at the beginning of the story, and what's triggered by the inciting incident.
I recommend episode 456 of the Helping Writers become Authors podcast. https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/podcasts/
For book recommendations:
https://trello.com/b/3LUWiqsc/pilars-board-on-writing-for-word-maze-podcast
And to find out more about me and get in touch: www.pilarwrites.com
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