All Episodes

June 5, 2025 18 mins

Over the years Darren and Mark have made…and seen…several mistakes. Today they’re joined by Stage Time University faculty member Mike Davis as they discuss the mistakes they see most often…even after 30+ years of coaching. This episode feature mistakes #10 through #6 in the countdown. Avoiding these will help you to be unforgettable on the platform.

 

SNIPPETS:

 

• Avoid ending on Q & A or with a ‘THANK YOU’ slide

 

• Circle back to your opening and end with impact

 

• Can your audience see themselves in your story

 

• Do research and homework to relate more closely with your audience

 

• Use present tense and phrases like “let me take you back…”

 

• End with punchy, concrete words

 

• Show the consequences of actions NOT taken

 

• Be clear on what is at stake

 

• Avoid continuous narration

 

• Use dialogue, body language and facial expression for depiction

 

6. Too Much “Tell,” Not Enough “Show”

Why it matters: Narrating facts and feelings doesn't activate the audience’s imagination. The brain craves visuals, dialogue, and motion.


Fix: Include short bursts of scene-based storytelling. Show reactions. Use dialogue. Let us see and feel it.

 

7. Unclear If-Then Stakes

Why it matters: Without an IF-THEN, there’s no urgency. No reason to act. No consequence for staying the same.

Fix: Highlight the risk: “If I stayed silent, we would have lost the client. If I spoke up, I might get fired.”

 

Mark as Played

Advertise With Us

Popular Podcasts

On Purpose with Jay Shetty

On Purpose with Jay Shetty

I’m Jay Shetty host of On Purpose the worlds #1 Mental Health podcast and I’m so grateful you found us. I started this podcast 5 years ago to invite you into conversations and workshops that are designed to help make you happier, healthier and more healed. I believe that when you (yes you) feel seen, heard and understood you’re able to deal with relationship struggles, work challenges and life’s ups and downs with more ease and grace. I interview experts, celebrities, thought leaders and athletes so that we can grow our mindset, build better habits and uncover a side of them we’ve never seen before. New episodes every Monday and Friday. Your support means the world to me and I don’t take it for granted — click the follow button and leave a review to help us spread the love with On Purpose. I can’t wait for you to listen to your first or 500th episode!

NFL Daily with Gregg Rosenthal

NFL Daily with Gregg Rosenthal

Gregg Rosenthal and a rotating crew of elite NFL Media co-hosts, including Patrick Claybon, Colleen Wolfe, Steve Wyche, Nick Shook and Jourdan Rodrigue of The Athletic get you caught up daily on all the NFL news and analysis you need to be smarter and funnier than your friends.

The Joe Rogan Experience

The Joe Rogan Experience

The official podcast of comedian Joe Rogan.

Music, radio and podcasts, all free. Listen online or download the iHeart App.

Connect

© 2025 iHeartMedia, Inc.