Are your inquiry emails turning off your best leads? 😬 In this episode of Business-First Creatives, I’m breaking down the three email red flags I see over and over again in client inbox audits — and showing you exactly how to fix them.
Whether you’re leading with pricing too soon, asking for homework too early, or leaving people hanging without a clear next step — this episode will help you rewrite that first impression.
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Find It Quickly:
00:00 — This one email might be doing more harm than good
01:10 — The pricing mistake that makes you sound like a spreadsheet
02:45 — Two ways to share your rates without scaring people off
04:58 — Are you asking too much, too soon?
06:00 — What belongs on your contact form (not in your email)
07:25 — Stop asking for permission — do this instead
08:35 — What your inquiry email should actually say
10:40 — How to lead with confidence (even in automation)
11:40 — Want more booked clients? Start here.
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